Monday 3 March 2014

A215 TMA3 Poetry

Just got my poetry mark back from A215. I submitted two free verse poems one about migraines - topical and one about winter (also topical but a bit more typical!) I really was not expecting much as I never wrote poetry before this module (and now I never will again,) and didn't enjoy the process at all.  So I was really surprised and pleased to get a mark in the same range as my prose work and now I can move onto life writing without having to hope for extra marks to make up for my deficient poetry! 


Aura

Light echoes and blurs
Thump, thump, thump
Your eyes begin to pulse
warning of a unwanted visit
from an old and spiteful companion
pepper and lemon fill your mouth and nose
retching acrid acidic air

Close the blinds, flick at the switches
off, off, off
dim the screens, rustle the curtains closed,
turn the electric clock to the wall
Light is not your friend.
sitting still, swallowing the chalky solutions
The roil of your stomach roars

Not at home for this.
Dash, dodge, deflect
ignoring the knock on the door of your conscious
the room revolves around
it's slow orbit convincingly real
clinging to the carpet cautiously
grasping at ephemeral hope of escape
(21 lines)

Fourth Quarter

First it is darkness – the world dims
The sun has gone down too soon
everyone grumbles, they miss the light.

Then it is the emerald painted white
A frosted tip hairstyle for the lawn
Glimpsed outside a window.

Now it is the breath that steams ahead
a warm puff then a sharp intake.
Barriers are erected, faces lost beneath scarves

Next it is glass on the ground,
Footsteps cautious, grip unsure
Carefully, carefully down the street.

Following it is the clouds – a warning sign.
White sky, white wind, white world
The flurries begins to fall.

So it is here, the world is blanketed
Traffic stills, life disrupted
For a quarter of it all.

(18 lines)